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Revisions W/ Maya

Sep 25, 2018
2 min read

My goal of this session was to declutter the words, since i was tripping over my words. I also wasn't in love with the melody. I had a friend help me so I could get a non biased ear. I moved some text around and made a lot of revisions.

You keep getting rings on your phone

Probobly getting sick of the tone

Why he so clingly, why he so needy, why wont he leave me alone

I just need to take a break, give me 5minutes to take

I think her feelings for me might be fake

When you left i was fine, but now youre constantly on my mind

And now im all alone, and i find myself constantly staring at my phone, waiting for you

To text to call, to send a picture, anything at all

Thats what i need, but i know i wont get

Chorus

Im sorry i just wanna talk to you

Im sorry i just want to get a little closer

Im sorry that i just wanna talk to yo

Im sorry i need to get a little off my mental

Verse

12 staring at my phone, even though I keep getting the your dial tone

Scrolling through my camera roll i see you,

I know i should delete the pictures, but i cant stand to.

These are the lyrics pre the session.

When you you left you said we would still keep,in touch, but now im not feeling any of your love

You want me to move on, but every week since im getting less and less strong

When you left i was fine, but now youre constantly on my mind

And now im all alone, and i find myself staring at my phone, waiting for you

To text to call, to send a picture, anything at all

Thats what i need, but i know i wont get

Chorus

Im sorry i just wanna talk to you

Im sorry i just want to be a little closer

Im sorry that i just wanna talk to you

Im sorry i need to get a little off my mental

Oh im sorry ×2

Verse

12 o clockn staring at my phone, even though I keep getting your dial tone

And when i try to forget, all im left with is more regret.

I know why your ghosting me, that i understand, but im sorry that i still want to hold your hand

Im sorry that i want to see you, but cant pay the cost, im sorry to myself that i feel so lost.

Im sorry that i just want to know how you are, Is that so bizarre.

Bridge Guitar only

Chorus

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