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StandStill

Jan 7, 2019
2 min read

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DRMvONgEFvsyd81LR24xPA6q9r9369QQ/view?usp=sharing

Song Draft ^

This is the audio draft for studio, its all the audio, I havent had time to master anything yet. Some of the panning is started, but there is much more to do.

I have to different possible back round vocal parts. One is durring the first chorus, while the other is durring the third/ last chorus.

Things I need to fix

Turn up bass

Decide on back round part

Touch up vocals

add more reverb to guitar

Add percussion? maybe shaker, I dont want the song to be crowded.

Master

I cant write too much about this one, I'm currently knee deep in paper work, but wanted to get this up.

"StandStill" By Riley O’Lena 12/28/18

Capo 4th

D9 B9 Bb9 Cmaj7 A7 A#7 slid up to 4th fret (form of C)?

Im usually the nicest person, so why is nobody nice to me,

Im done with all the niceties, cause they’re not quite working out for me

Everything seems fine then, then everything's a blur,

Im falling forwards sad and lonely, cause the fallout of her

Chorus

Do one bad thing and, a bad thing happens

Do some good things, but good things dont happen to me

I can do some charity

But i’ve had my fill

Screw Carma, cause its got me in a standstill

Play through chords but end on cmaj7 (dont go to A)

All my friends are eh, I want there drama to end

Most of them just pretend, and talk shit when your backs turned to them

Surrounded by people all the time, then why am i so lonely

Im tired of lonesomely saying there's plenty of fish in an empty sea

Chorus

Do one bad thing and, a bad thing happens

Do some good things, but good things dont happen to me

I have done my charity

But i’ve had my fill

screw Carma, cause carma got me in a standstill

Guitar SoLo

Chorus

 
 
 

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