Song #3. Confidence? Shoulder Talk?

It's been a little while. I've been busy with working on music, and trying to finish songs. I just finished Confidence (working title) last week, I am planning to begin recording this week. I added a bridge to the song, some word changes, and just tweaked minor melodies.

Thinking I was ready, I decided to do it at an open mic, and lets just say it was rough. I had not had enough time with it and went in half cocked. I also performed another song that was not super ready. It was okay, but not high enough for my standards, shows you what will happen when you are forced into an open mic you couldn't practice for @dad.

I will be recording the song over break, maybe even with a quick youtube re-record in my basement just for fun. The main question is what instruments I want/ If I wanna switch the guitar part to my electric. I think other than that, I just want bass, drums, and maybe another guitar for a solo.

Here is the "Final" lyrics.

Chorus A, D7, F7, E7 (All Barred)

Verse (Open chords)

Hello from the little devil on your left shoulder,

im afraid we have to talk

Im sorry if my tones a little colder,

but that's what you need to hear if you want to be what your not

If you wanna stop getting friend-zoned, owned, and not boned. Than we gotta start

We need to change the way you dress, act, walk and talk, change almost every part

Im sorry its oh so so true,

so lets start you, with the introduction (Or let me start the introduction for you)

Chorus ( barred versions)

You need to get more confident, because its quite evident that your not yet

You need to stop being so nice, think about yourself and don't think twice

thats my advice

Verse

You're still doing the nice guy thing,

when you really need to get more tough

You're on your way to becoming a king

You're learning very quick, but not learning quick enough

You need to stop being the shoulder they cry on, but be the one who breaks their hearts

You need to be the that well dressed, chilled out, godly whirlwind that tears their world apart

You need to class up, get smart, grow a pairs balls

Make drop dead when you're walking down the damn halls

Most of all think back to what i told you

Chorus

I got something to say to you

Bridge (A, G, E, G) Final chord of bridge is E7 instead of G.

Hello again from your bud beelzebub, let's turn a 6 to a 10

Forget everything about yourself if you want to be per fec tion

Your gentrification at the cost of annihilation, a message im pushing out into the entire nation

The key to your salvation, is no self admiration, I' just want you to not be you

Chorus

Thats my advice X2

Well isnt that nice